I do want to share a descriptive essay that Brie and TD wrote together. It isn't the final project because TD had his hands in this draft a little too much, but all the ideas were Brie's and all of the initial descriptions. TD just added the small details. I really enjoyed it and wanted to share it on our blog.
Happy Reading!!
Brie
November 6, 2012
Period 2
Crowds of People Couldn’t
Take the Magic Away!
And then it happened.
The gates opened. Once the park
opened and all the people rushed through the gates like cattle, my stress level
went through the roof! We hadn’t really
made a plan, but Heather, my stepdad’s cousin’s wife, explained that we needed
to go to the kid rides first, so off we went to ride Peter Pan and It’s A Small
World in the very back section called Fantasyland. We were able to get on both without waiting
at all. The ride wait clock said “5
minutes,” but I think was just because it took 5 minutes to walk to the front
of the ride! Although the Fantasyland
section started filling up, Magic Kingdom was big enough that the people that
rushed through the gates were spread out and the morning seemed like we could
do anything we wanted without a wait!
As the day went on, however, the crowds of people grew
rapidly. Walking down Main Street around
noon, back towards the gates to meet the Disney Princesses in the Theater, people
rushed in like waves crashing against the buildings around us. I get nervous in such large crowds,
especially with trying to keep up with my family and make sure my baby brother
was ok, so I tried focusing on other things to alleviate some of my anxieties. I
was able to relax a little and I began taking in a whole new side of Disney,
one that the eye just couldn’t capture.
The assorted smells tickled at my nose.
The candy shops smelled of savory candy apples and bitter dark chocolate
bars topped with innumerable concoctions of caramel, chocolate and other
goodies. The concession stands smelled
of greasy hot dogs and fries. The
restaurants smelled more of gourmet food, but equally delicious! There were terrible smells as well. As we were all bunched together, some people
thought it was a good day to not wear deodorant. The stench singed my nostril hairs, making
them into little stubbles. Different
noises beat at my eardrums, too. The mix
of foreign languages was muffled, but loud enough to hear sounds like
gibberish. It was all enough to cause a
headache! Each corner I turned there was
a young child with glossy eyes and puffy eyelids; tears staining their angelic
faces. The blood circulation on my
finger was slowing down as my baby brother Gavin tightened his grip around my
finger.
I found myself back in reality, shuffling through the crowds
of people, feeling again as if we were cattle being rounded up, standing, or
more like pushing, shoulder-to-shoulder, touching each other. As it grew later in the day, the crowds grew
in every direction, left, right, up and down.
We managed to watch several shows, fighting off people who insisted on
encroaching on our personal space! Even
with such people, the Dream Along With Mickey show at Cinderella’s Castle and
the Celebrate a Dream Come True parade that we watched in Frontierland were
simply magical!
The darkness finally arrived. Normally I love nighttime, but I was dreading
the fact that the millions of other people, or so it seemed, were probably not
going to do much better in the dark! Waiting
for food, getting pushed and pulled in many directions at once, having to tell
an old woman to please remove her shoe from my butt, all of these things could
have put a damper on any other event I’ve been to. But not the Main Street Electrical Parade,
and certainly not the Wishes Nighttime Spectacular! Floats covered in lights, designed to make
scenes from movies like Alice in Wonderland and Peter Pan were amazing. The Cheshire Cat even made an appearance,
disappearing and reappearing in vibrant pinks and purples. Cinderella’s Castle was a bright and shiny monument
against a pitch black landscape, changing from violet to pistachio green to
fuchsia pink and peacock blue. Light up
balloons and bubbles from the bubble guns filled the air around us just as Tinkerbell,
wrapped in lights, flew out of the castle spire. This was the moment we had been waiting for
the entire day! Our faces lit up, just
as the sky did, as the most amazing fireworks that can ever be seen made this
moment seem so… magical! Not so surprising
given that we were at the most magical place on earth!
The post-parade crowds, shoving and stepping could have affected my mood, but I didn’t even notice. No one did. We were in such awe from the efforts of Disney to create such a wonderful place that it didn’t matter. It didn’t even register in my memories! And although every single soccer mom in the park rammed me in the ankles with her bulky, devilish stroller on the way out, they could not take away the magic that Magic Kingdom shared with us!
The post-parade crowds, shoving and stepping could have affected my mood, but I didn’t even notice. No one did. We were in such awe from the efforts of Disney to create such a wonderful place that it didn’t matter. It didn’t even register in my memories! And although every single soccer mom in the park rammed me in the ankles with her bulky, devilish stroller on the way out, they could not take away the magic that Magic Kingdom shared with us!
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